In The Attic

Very nice job. The only thing I can maybe suggest is more of a shadow behind her. There is a blinding ray of light hitting her and maybe blending the paper in with the floor a bit more, to make it look more like it belongs there, not that it was randomly put it. if you know what I mean? (ugh the minimum limit) Hmmm Maybe a little more darker on the left to make it more dramatic perhaps and the light hitting the back of the girl shouldn't be there if the light is hitting the front. I really really like this picture (I hope it didn't sound mean, I was just pointing out suggestions) But I think it looks fantastic just how it stands right now too <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>